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  • May 25 @ 12:25pm
I walked in out of the heat and in to the the gloomy apartment building that was both home and office. I flicked a Lucky Strike into my mouth with a well practiced and casual ease before patting down my coat in the hunt for a match. It was a routine I'd perfected to avoid the glare of the old Mrs Kawalski, the landlady. I was almost always behind on rent, today was no exception.

I had a problem, a big one. Someone decided to go and put a bullet El Bigote, in the biggest 'tache in town. Sounds like El Bigote's the one with the problem right? Yeah, well they decided to go do it with my peice.

So now, I aint too bothered about the lack of paycheck at the end of this gig. Now I just wanna stay out of the big house and find out who framed me in all of this.

Gonna be one of those days...

Comments

Pip says:
Great shot.
Posted: May 25th, 2011 - 12:32pm -
Hodges says:
Very good!
Posted: May 25th, 2011 - 12:35pm -
teenagerobot says:
lookin' good. nice narrative too.
Posted: May 25th, 2011 - 12:36pm -
mooka says:
Death approves of your Lucky Strike habit. I'll see you early!
Posted: May 25th, 2011 - 12:54pm -
miguelito says:
noir goodness
Posted: May 25th, 2011 - 1:09pm -
Dschonn says:
Noir. Et blanc.
Posted: May 25th, 2011 - 1:49pm -
Amandas Autopsies says:
Bloody love it!
Posted: May 25th, 2011 - 2:20pm -
MoustacheofDeath says:
That's a fav right there. Awesome shot and a nice backstory as a cherry on the top.
Posted: May 25th, 2011 - 2:38pm -
gunsmoke says:
Um. I guess my day wasn't so terrible.
Posted: May 25th, 2011 - 3:18pm -
brokenchopstick says:
Someone is getting method on LA Noire. This can only be a good thing.
Posted: May 25th, 2011 - 4:24pm -
Philiciousness says:
Cinematic genius! Well done.
Posted: May 25th, 2011 - 9:28pm -
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